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One chime of the wooden clock.
Two pairs of running feet.
Three presences in the room...

There in the shadows it lay hidden.
The little boys' hearts she could but listen.
She who was murdered bloody and young.
Would seek revenge to which she clung.


Four fists hammering the locked door.
Five inches floating above the floor.
Six shallow rasps of breath.

Tender movement across the space.
Wicked smile spread upon her face.
She hovered closer to the little boys.
Tiny things that were made her toys.


Seven...
Eight...
Nine...

She was killed too early in life.
By the serrated slice of her father's knife.
Never leaving as the years went by.
What she desired was for all to die.


Ten short seconds that crawled past.
Eleven heartbeats moved too fast.
Twelve midnight on All Hallows' Eve...
       It would be their last.
Something I came up with for Halloween.
I wish my country celebrated it):

Anyway, the creature in this is called a Myling.
A vengeful child ghost that either died unbaptized or was murdered.
Something I can easily imagine the Supernatural boys hunting:D
And yes, everything did happen in the span of 12 seconds.

I'll be entering this into [link] 's, [link] 's and [link] 's contest :D
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Designer-Spy Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
:wow: Another awesome poem. It has a creepy feeling to it. The fact that I'm reading it with a flickering lamp beside me is not making me feel any safer. :fear: Awesome work!
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Tishawish Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2011
Hahaha, thank you!
Also have to thank your flickering lamp for setting off the mood:XD:
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Designer-Spy Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
You're most welcome :hug:
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xgnyc Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
:woohoo: Congratulations! :woohoo:
You're entry has received an Honorable Mention in XGNYC's Halloween & Samhain Contest 2011! :clap:
Please visit the Contest journal here... => [link]

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Tishawish Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2011
Aww, thank you!:heart:
*Runs to check journal*
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xgnyc Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
:sprint:
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missimoinsane Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sadley this would have won 2nd place at #AnotherContestGroup's halloween contest however you clearly broke the rule that said "entries must be made for our contest and our contest only". So we're removing this from the contest entries.
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Tishawish Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2011
Oh well, that's too bad I guess. It's all right. I wrote this only for this contest initially but then I saw others that fit the bill. It's my silly mistake^^;
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xgnyc Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Great! Thank you for entering the contest and good luck!
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Tishawish Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2011
Thank you:D
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